Reviewer-1 Comments & Response
The writer addressed the significance of the problem & the relevance of research to social policy needs to be examined.
The reference to social justice was taken out since the paper does not address social justice.
The literature review was extended.
The literature is discussed in more detail.
A description of how the planned study would address this issue has been expanded.
The paper was organized, and it is easier to follow.
Transitions were included.
The tone is professional.
Grammar and punctuation were corrected. Sentences are succinct, and word selection are consistent.
APA was corrected.
Reviewer-2 Comments & Response
Overall, the paper is well done and can significantly contribute to the literature. The introduction and literature review are thorough and well-executed.
The results section was expanded and descriptions are provided elaborating on each theme and then incorporating relevant quotes as examples.
References were updated in the body of the paper and the reference page