FROM : Outcomes of A Sensory Garden for Caregivers of Individuals With Intellectual Developmental Disabilities

Author,s Revision

I hope all is well. I have made the grammatical corrections and added more to the discussion. However, I was a little confused about the demographics feedback. The students did not compare age, race or gender to determine how a certain group felt about the sensory garden. Their focus was to determine the newly installed garden was beneficial to staff and their mood. The students were concerned about employees that were employed at the adult day center rather than demographics such as age, gender, race and etc. I hope this helps.